Final First Draft of Promotional Poster

I feel my poster is unconventional of a typical promotional poster as it is landscape rather than portrait. I like the font used for the name of the artist as it shows the edgy genre and connotes it being damaged due to the song I am wanting to promote. My image could be more clear and use better skills of my photography as well as push myself to be more adventurous with the images especially when it comes to editing in photoshop. Also using the girl actor within the music video instead of the artist I am promoting may be another mistake I have now realised once coming to the final parts of the product but I am willing to create more drafts and learn from these mistakes.

However due to my genre being a very black and white dominated genre I also created a black and white version to see if this would be more appealing to my target audience. Due to the black and white I feel like I lose my image and it makes the movement of my girl actor stand out more ruining the poster. I feel the font needs to be more clear in both posters and make more of an impact to my audience.