Peer Feedback from Second Draft of Music Video

After finishing my second draft of my music video. I asked a few girls and boys to watch my music video and give me one positive and one negative for feedback. the age range was between 13-18. All ages enjoyed the music video and I got a lot of really good comments from them however they felt there was a few things I could do to adjust the video and make it better to suit their needs and what they would like to see. I will take this into account when focusing on my next draft.